Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Weightless day



The hike was not long, but the sharp drop from the pine forest into the valley glen and the slimy, still, forest pond evoked mystery, adventure, and timelessness.  Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches wrapped in wax paper had oozed in the 80-degree heat.  It was cooler there.  The dark green shadows of the pine and hemlock trees, interrupted occasionally by a speckle of sunshine, stirred a slight breeze.  Robbie and I had yet to grow apart.  It would be a year or more before pre-teen innocence suddenly faded away.   

Lunch in the piney woods

Broken glass, milk mixed with blood, primitive (but successful) first aid.  We will not go home! 

Play on . . . . . .

Much later, in the distance we faintly hear the Holsteins being called in for milking time.  “Come boss . . .  . , come boss . . .    We should go . . . . . . . the adults will be looking for us . . . . . .

Play on . . . . . .    

2 comments:

  1. Love this. I think this style is perfect for this blog.

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  2. Quite evocative. Minimalism in the narrative adds to the dream or memory quality of the post.

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